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错了!雅思写作开头这样写才对

2023-09-27 供稿单位: 易世教育 原创作者:Cindy


万事开头难!
 
对于写作咯吱脆的小烤鸭,雅思写作开头就已经够难秃人的.......
 
今天意思君就来讲下关于如何写雅思写作TASK2的开头
 
首先要明确开头段的目的,一般来说,开头段我们需要达到两个目标:
 
A. 引入主题
 
B. 表明观点
 


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引入主题
 
把题目中谈论的核心话题引入到我们的文章中;
 
注意:照抄原题不算字数,也会反映出考生有限的词汇资源;
 
应对策略:同义改写。
 
方法:
 
 开门见山,直接入题
 
转折对比入题
 
方法1:开门见山,直接入题
 
例1:
 
Many people consider the death penalty to be appropriate punishment in certain cases whilst others think that there is never a reason for it to be used. Do you agree or disagree?
 
Sample Answer:
 
The issue of death penalty is an emotional one, with many people taking the attitude that it needs to be used both often and swiftly to deter crime. Others believe that in a so-called "civilized" society, the death penalty is little more than barbarism.
 
直接入题常用句型总结:
 
 
① The issue of... is a/an controversial/sensitive/emotional one.
 
② The problem/question of... is not a new one.
 
③ It is a hot-debated issue...
 
④ It is quite common these days...
 
⑤ There is much discussion these days about...
 
⑥ There has long been a debate about...
 
例2:
 
People receive a lot of information from news reports presented by journalists. However, some people claim that we cannot believe the news that we are presented with. What is your opinion on the issue? In addition, what qualities do you think journalists should have?
 
Sample Answer:
 
Living in an information age, we are all too often overloaded with various news in the newspapers, on television and over the radio. But a large proportion of them prove to be forged or fabricated, such as the South China tiger scandal in 2007. So how much can we trust the news we are presented with? And what qualities should the journalists have?
 
例3:
 
The overuse of modern technologies in recreational activities makes human beings less creative. Do you agree or disagree?
 
Sample Answer:
 
In recent years, there has been a debate about whether the use of modem technology increases or decreases people's creativity. I believe modem technology has generally allowed people to become more creative.
 
方法2:转折对比入题
 
例1:
 
A report indicates that nowadays children are becoming more and more lazy, fat and unsociable. Discuss the reasons for this and give some proposals.
 
Sample Answer:
 
The social and economic development should have resulted in a happier and healthier life for children. However, recently increasingly more parents are concerning their children have become lazy, fat and unsociable.
 
表虚拟语气的句型:
 
 ... should have... However, ...
 
 If..., should have...
 
例2:
 
The overuse of modern technologies in recreational activities makes human beings less creative. Do you agree or disagree?
 
Sample Answer:
 
It is generally acknowledged that modern technologies in recreational activities have brought people easier and more convenient life. However, to use them too often might result in the loss of creativity belonging to human beings.
 
“人们一般认为”:
 
It is
 
universally
 
acknowledged that...
 
well
 
accepted that...
 
widely
 
believed that...
 
generally
 
maintained that...
 
请大家一定要重视开头和结尾段的写作。考官在改大家作文的时候,并不会很仔细地去关注到每一个单词,而是挑重点去改。
 
那这个“重点”具体指什么呢?其实就是我们文章的开头和结尾段,以及主体段部分的Topic Sentence。
 
如果这些地方写得非常精彩的话,是非常加分的。因此请烤鸭们仔细琢磨上面介绍的几种写法,认真练习,以达到最大的进步!欢迎大家在线咨询意思君领取雅思试听课哦~

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