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雅思写作怎样写出漂亮的句子?

2023-09-06 供稿单位: 易世教育 原创作者:编辑

       很多考生都会忧心一个问题,那就是自己的雅思作文写很干扁无味,很多时候套模板也是不伦不类的感觉,那么怎样才能写出漂亮的雅思作文呢?下面几点或许可以帮到你:
     1.慎用There be
  There be 是大家最常用也最熟知的举行之一,但是如果在一篇文章中出现大量的there be ,就有可能让考官觉得太过重复。且不要忘记歪果仁比较习惯倒装句,读起来会更地道。
  改写前:
  There are widespread rumors of job losses.
  改写后:
  Rumors of job losses can be heard everywhere.

  2.介词代从句
  虽然从句会显得很高级,但有时候一个介词往往会更简洁。而in , at , during等等介词都可以用来替代从句。
  改写前:
  I’ll call you when I arrive.
  改写后:
  I’ll call you upon arrival.
 
  3.关系代词可省略
  定语从句虽然也是考场中的常见句型,但通过省略关系代词,我们可以将大部分的定语从句进行精简。
  改写前:
  From childhood, he had an instinct that made him excited and interested in all things which were electronic.
  改写后:
  From childhood, he had an instinctive feel for all things electronic.
  将句中的made him excited and interested in 用 instinctive feel来进行代替,是不是简洁又高级?
  再为大家举个例子:
  改写前:
  An Ideal Husband is a film adaptation of Oscar Wilde's play that tells the story of a popular politician who was involved in a scandal that led to his downfall.
  改写后:
  An Ideal Husband is a film adaptation of Oscar Wilde's play that tells the story of a popular politician brought down by a scandal.
  将who 和 that省略,就能够显得更加见解。

  4.词性稍稍做改变
  词性做改变不仅是雅思的常见用法之一,我们同样可以将这个技巧用在作文中,会让你的句子更加简介。
  改写前:
  Mr Cunningham, who teaches creative writing at Yale University, is extremely funny and psychologically observant, but he does not believe in happy endings.
  改写后:
  Mr Cunningham, who teaches creative writing at Yale University, is extremely funny and psychologically observant, but he is no believer in happy endings.
  将does not believe 变成 no believer in,虽然在字数上并没有过多的改变,但是句子的语气和立场的坚定程度都已经顺利up up 了有么有!

  5.口语书面要分清
  和中文一样,英语中也有书面语和口语的表达,在写作中,尽量使用书面语,口语化的诸如terrific, rotten等等都要小心谨慎,尽量避免使用。如果对于用词没有太多把握,可以在查阅书籍或字典的时候注意一下,如果看见有informal标识,就表示是不正式的,尽量不要用在书面语中。

  6.用词要多样
  用词多样是我们强调过多次的写作技巧,让我们来看一段话:
  Africa can simply jump straight over it and go right to the latest thing. Just as drones can make up for poor roads, the theory goes, mobile phones can overcome a lack of well-functioning banks, portable solar panels can stand in for missing power stations and free learning apps can substitute for patchy education.
  一个句子里面连续使用了 make up for, overcome, stand in for, substitute for 这几个词来表达“取代”这个概念,这也从侧面反映出积累近义表达的重要性。

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